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阅读以下学生习作,回答问题。

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阅读,真好①有人喜欢唱歌,有人喜欢网游,有人喜欢吃吃喝喝,而我喜欢阅读。②我喜欢一个人的时候坐在书房里静静地看书,看天南海北的故事,和书中人物尽情交流。③阅读,它有一种吸引力,让我放松,让我快乐,让我坚强。④阅读,让我在恢心的时候重获信心。记得初一那年,竞选班干部,自幼做贯了班长的我没选上,心中有丝丝失落。再加上一些同学话语的催化,好强的我军训第二天回家便泪流满面。恰是那时,我在书中读到了贝多芬双耳失聪依然坚强,读到了爱迪生失败多次还坚持做实验的故事。那些故事如重锤,反复地敲打着我的心房。是的,面对生活的风雨,不要害怕,要有信心。当班长需要过硬的成绩,现在没选上,证明实力不够,有本事就拿成绩去争回来呀,相信拼搏之后总会见到阳光。于是,不服输的我在连考五次第一之后,终于凭实力赢得了班长职位。⑤阅读,让我在愤怒的时候变得理性。初二上学期,我和一个好友发生了口角。当时,我气鼓鼓地回到教室,埋怨朋友的小气和口不择言。正生气时,一个从书上看来的故事在头脑中浮现:春秋时,齐国有一对非常要好的朋友,管仲与鲍叔牙。尽管管仲做了什么,鲍叔牙总是理解他。这个故事一直印在我的脑海里,让我平静,让我思考:小气、恶毒,这是我朋友的特点吗?当然不是,我被罚扫地时,她帮我扫了一周,我的钱丢了时,她陪我吃了一个星期的素,艰苦却极开心。我的朋友对我这样好,我却因为一点小矛盾就认为她是个恶毒的人。于是,我和朋友重归于好。⑥阅读,让我在迷茫中找到方向。初三上学期,学习极为紧张,一连几次考试,我都考得十分不如意,升学的压力、父母的指责、老师的期望、自己的失落,种种压力一层又一层地扣在我身上,我快透不过气来。但我硬是挺了过来,为什么?因为阅读。每每遭遇学习上的困难,我便会一头扎进书房,读名人传记,从中获得力量。拿破仑、乔丹、奧巴马、贝克汉姆,这些名人的不屈不挠的奋斗精神,总是能在我最失落的时候,抚平我的忧伤,让我振作精神,再次奋斗,直至成功。⑦有人说,看闲书是玩物丧志。而我,要感谢阅读,是阅读给我带来正能量。让我在痛苦时变得坚强,让我在孤独时获得温暖,让我在迷茫中发现希望。阅读,你会是我一生中永不离弃的依靠。⑧阅读,真好!问题:(1)请从第④段找出两个错别字,从第⑤段找出一处病句,分别改正。(8分)(2)请指出该习作的一个缺点,并提出具体的改进建议。(12分)

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